Si quelqu'un est fort en anglais , peut-il m'aider a corriger mes fautes dans ce texte : (Le sujet est : whrite one thing that you think Madison helped you get
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Si quelqu'un est fort en anglais , peut-il m'aider a corriger mes fautes dans ce texte : (Le sujet est : " whrite one thing that you think Madison helped you get through this year." )
" She keeps repeating that we must be positive even when we are sad.
She had problems but she stayed strong and we must do like her. When I am sad , I listen her single "Unbreakable" and I understand that we are unbreakable . That's why Madison helped me . She is a good person ."
" She keeps repeating that we must be positive even when we are sad.
She had problems but she stayed strong and we must do like her. When I am sad , I listen her single "Unbreakable" and I understand that we are unbreakable . That's why Madison helped me . She is a good person ."
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse bilelsta
je pense q uil ny a pas d erreur mais il faudrair voir avec d autres persoone si il sont plus foet que moi en anglais -
2. Réponse nadiaalvaro
She kept repeating that we had to be positive even when we were sad. She had had problems but she stayed strong enough and we had to be like her. When I am sad, she said, I listen to Unbreakable and I understand that we are unbreakable. That´s the way Madison helped me . She is a really nice person.